John C. Wright ([info]johncwright) wrote,
@ 2009-11-16 11:31:00
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Book Review: Story of Your Life and Others by Ted Chiang
I found to my surprise that I never posted by Amazon.com review of Ted Chiang's brilliant (but to my taste too nihilistic) STORY OF YOUR LIFE AND OTHERS here on my livejournal. Let me rectify that oversight at once.

(WARNING! I am a science-fiction writer in economic competition with Mr. Chiang. All my gripes must be taken with a grain of salt.)
Eight well-crafted stories with engaging and interesting ideas are marred by weak endings. Each story ends with tepid pessimism.

MILD SPOILERS AHEAD.
First, the "Tower of Babylon" tale engages the reader with solid characterization and a thought-provoking description of what the mighty engineering feat of "building a tower to heaven" would have been like, had the world been flat. It is filled with amusing and authentic touches, like the Egyptian stone-masons brought in to chip through the hard surface of the sky-dome, or the description of how mid-levels of the tower rendered inhospitable by the too-near approach of the fiery sun. But the ending is weak, and the immense tower turns out to have been built in vain.

In "Understand" the super intelligent man is obsessed with finding a perfect expression of linguistic philosophy that will express the universe. The depiction of a mind smarter than any mind of man is wonderfully well-done, and the story is worth reading just for this alone. The super-mind discovers a second super intelligent man. One man wants nothing but to be left alone while he pursues his research, while the other wishes to use his powers to benefit mankind peacefully. Neither one is threatening or interfering with the goals of the other. For no apparent reason, and without any plot-purpose, these two "superior intelligences" both mutually agree that there is no possible way they both can exist, they duel, and one murders the other. What a waste. Maybe they were not so bright after all.

In "Story of your Life" a mother, through the study of an alien language, learns how to see the universe from a timeless point of view. She knows her daughter is going to die in a pointless accident even before the night the daughter is conceived. The mother does nothing, and can do nothing, to prevent the accident, since only those things that are fated to be will be. Precognition is vain.

In "Divide by Zero" all mathematics turns out to be vain.

"Liking What You See: A Documentary" once again, starts with a very interesting science fiction premise: what would the world be like if we could turn off our perception of human beauty? And, once again, the story soon disappoints. A college is debating whether to impose beauty-blindness on all its students. Both sides of the issue are debated. A girl who tries to make herself look nice to win the affection of a boy she loves is rebuffed when the boy turns off his beauty-seeing abilities. The girl realizes it is "unfair" to look better than other people. So her attempts are futile. In the end, an evil conspiracy of (I am not making this up) Big Lipstick Companies successfully prevents widespread implementation of the beauty-blindness plan by (you guessed it) having a particularly attractive spokeswoman sway the debate. So the entire debate was futile. This same egalitarian theme appears in a famous short story by Kurt Vonnegut, one where pretty folk were burned with acid, and smart individuals were lobotomized, so that everyone was "equal" and nothing would rouse the spite and envy of the herd. There, Vonnegut's tale cheers for the individual; here, Chiang's tale cheers for the herd.

"The Evolution of Human Science" has all scientific inquiry prove futile once super artificial intelligences take over the field.

The satire "Hell is the Absence of God" reads like it was written by someone who never met a Christian, or read anything written by a Christian. In this tale, those who see the light of heaven are grotesquely disfigured (their eyes and eye sockets are removed) and loose free will, and become perfect in faith, so that they are automatically assured of entrance into paradise. The main character, mourning after the death of his wife, seeks to find a spot where an angel is leaving or entering the world, so that he can, if only for a moment, glimpse the light of heaven, so that he can loose his eyes and his free will, but be assured of meeting his wife again in heaven. All goes as planned, but God capriciously sends the man to Hell in any case. Hell is not a place of torment, but a bland area much like earth, merely separate from God, peopled by Fallen Angels who sin was not rebellion, but free-thinking. Hence, out of all created beings, only the main character is actually suffering in Hell, since he is the only one who longs not to be there, and, thanks to his free will being destroyed, is the only one who loves God wholeheartedly. Again, all efforts of the main character to rejoin his wife are futile. There are secondary characters whose lives are also ruined and for no particular reason.

I myself am an unrepentant atheist, but I would never pen such trite antichristian propaganda. If an author is going to set a story in an alternate universe where the Christian myths happen to be true, the author should become familiar with (or, at least, hide his contempt for) the source material. Read Thomas Aquinas or John Milton. Christians may be wrong, but they are not stupid.

Over all, Mr. Chiang is an excellent writer, who writes wonderfully about big ideas, but weds them to a theme of dispirited nihilism. He is capable of subtle and penetrating characterization, except when he trots out a tired leftwing cliché, whereupon suddenly everything becomes flat and predictable (see, for example, his treatment of the CIA, Big Business, the Military, and the Victorian Age).

I can only recommend the first half of each story.
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I also have a longer discussion of my great discontent with the 'Hell is the Absence of God' posted here.



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[info]annafirtree
2009-11-16 08:58 pm UTC (link)
I recently read "Story of Your Life". And while I disliked that whole determinism thing, I felt the story was rather redeemed by the "I know you're going to die, but I'm going to have you anyway because you're worth it and I love you" message that I got out of the end.

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[info]starshipcat
2009-11-17 01:25 am UTC (link)
It's interesting that where you saw only futility in the ending of "Tower of Babylon," I saw evidence that God has a wry sense of humor, twisting the world into a sort of Klein bottle in order to keep impudent humans from intruding on the True Heaven. But then I was more fascinated with his development of a world that operates by a very different set of rules, and how it was unfolded in a logical way. When I started reading, I simply assumed that we were operating in a world like our own, a spheroid planet moving through space according to the cold equations of celestial mechanics -- although I should've realized that something was up when the narrator mentions the tower having become so tall that it took four days to climb to its top, yet offered no evidence of difficulty in keeping the workers provisioned. So when I came to the bit about the star hitting the tower and embedding itself in the wall, I was smugly smiling with the certainty that it was in fact a meteorite -- until we discover that no, this is not a world like our own, but one in which the primitive cosmology of a flat earth and the dome of the sky overhead is literally true. And he meticulously works out what such a world would be like, and what the practical engineering issues of mining the dome of heaven would be, in a world where God lived right overhead, with His realm separated from us only by some stone and giant water reservoirs. The twist ending did come as a surprise, but quite honestly I had been anticipating success on the miners' part resulting in an act of divine wrath on the level of Eru Illuvatar's remaking of Arda at the end of the Second Age in response to Ar-Pharazon's invasion of Valinor. Instead, God simply turns the protagonist's path back on itself so that he pops out of the ground like a rabbit and espies the tower in the distance, but no evidence of vast upheavals or punishments.

And I disliked "Division by Zero" not so much because it reveals mathematics to be futile per se, but because it did not follow through on the premise -- there were no consequences to the discovery. If arithmetic is naught but a set of mnemonics to help us through daily life and higher math is all a hollow sham, there should've been serious and significant consequences -- yet not only do ordinary people continue to be able to keep track of the cans of pop in their fridges and balance their checkbooks, but computers continue to operate and the banking system continues to function, in spite of the higher math such as that used to calculate compound interest having been revealed to be a hollow sham.

Maybe my response to these stories is the result of a lifetime of having to consciously figure out the rules of the Primary World -- not just the rules that are formally articulated, but the unspoken ones that most people pick up by osmosis. Rules that sometimes seemed to contradict the formally articulated rules, or at least made it such that simple rote mechanical following of the rulebook was not sufficient to navigate through the shoals of life. So I find the process of working out the rules of a fictional world fascinating, whether it's a purely made-up one or one in which a cosmology which is inaccurate in the Primary World is literally true.

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Alternate Physics
[info]johncwright
2009-11-17 03:50 am UTC (link)
You might also like Celestial Matters by Richard Garfinkle, which takes place in a universe where the Ptolemaic/Aristotlean laws of physics operate, rather than ours. The Earth is a sphere in the midst of concentric spheres of crystal where pure substances of quintessence float, and move by "natural motion" -- objects in motion tend to go to rest, and so on.

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[info]thegameiam
2009-11-17 03:12 pm UTC (link)
I had a very different take on this book (which I just finished a matter of days ago) than you did - I started from the premise that each story was a self-contained universe exploring an idea, and while there are analogies to our universe, none of those stories occur inside it. Perhaps this is why Hell is the Absence of God struck me as more profound rather than less - Chiang is of course setting up a strawman religion which shares many elements with Judeo-Christianity, but that religion is in fact qualitatively different than the one we experience precisely because of the different assumption. That the motives of God are not clear to humans is a theme well trod in classical Biblical exegesis (e.g. Jonah, Ecclesiastes) - he takes it a step further.

As the demotivational poster says, "sometimes the purpose of your life is to be a warning to others..."

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[info]mindstalk
2009-11-17 06:22 pm UTC (link)
That Hell is separation from the presence of God isn't something Chiang made up, either; you can find Christians saying the same thing.

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I am not convinced.
[info]johncwright
2009-11-17 07:17 pm UTC (link)
"I had a very different take on this book (which I just finished a matter of days ago) than you did - I started from the premise that each story was a self-contained universe exploring an idea, and while there are analogies to our universe, none of those stories occur inside it."

Forgive me if this sounds snarky, but I have heard a similar apologia offered to both Dan Brown's and to Phillip Pullman's hatchet jobs on Christianity.

If the Magisterium of a parallel world where men have externalized soul-creatures is totally evil and repressive, what is that to us here in this universe? If the Catholic Church in a parallel universe where the Holy Grail was the womb of Mary Magdalene, who was the mother of the Merovingian kings, what is that to us, who live in a universe where the Holy Grail was the sacred cup Joseph of Aramethea brought to England, which Galahad the Pure, son of Lancelot, now guards in the otherworldly chapel of Sarras in Wales?

Out of an infinity of possible worlds, surely there is one where the Evil Church is not evil, and God is not a sadistic fiend and oppressive reactionary -- it is just (no doubt by coincidence) there writers have stumbled across those particular shadows of Amber where the Eternal Champion of Tanelorn, hero of heroes, just so happens to be fighting the Evil Church of Evil.

Sorry, but I am unconvinced. These writers sought out those particular parallel worlds because that is the comment they wanted to make about the Church in this world.

Let me compare and contrast. In THAT HIDEOUS STRENGTH by CS Lewis, we are in a parallel world where the Eldil are clearly the good guys, and the Macrobes are the bad guys, and the NICE are materialist magicians who serve them -- and Lewis clearly means this to be a comment on our own world, where the angels are the good guys and the demons are the bad guys, and the materialists of our own world do (in Lewis's opinion, and in mine) the work of Hell. No one would think this book is not partisan. He is a partisan on my side, rather than on the enemy side, but the book still has a hortatory purpose, not just an entertainment purpose.

On the other hand, the Evil Church of Evil is the bad guy in Dan Simmons' book ENDYMION. However, if this reflects any opinion of Mr. Simmons, I am too dazzled by the brilliance of the book to tell. The Ultimate Intelligence of that book is a god-figure, and is a good guy, but both the evil Church and the good God seem like characters to me, on stage for the sake of the story, and not to make a partisan point. ENDYMION is clearly non-partisan, and I would defend it as such. I does not drip with Christophobia like Mr. Pullman and Mr. Brown, or, for that matter, with Christophilia, like Mr. Lewis.

I am not objection to writers making partisan points in their works. I am saying that I am unwilling to pretend Mr. Chiang's hate-filled screed of agitprop thinly disguised as a story is merely a story told for the sake of story-telling -- (and again I emphasize it is brilliant story-telling. The man is a genius) -- I might indeed enjoy the tale were that the case, but it is not the case.

I could not even enjoy the story back when I was an unrepentant, blaspheming, and triumphalist atheist, because it was too clumsily partisan, too obviously propaganda, and grossly lying propaganda at that: even as an atheist, I knew what Christian said about Free Will and the paramount importance their stupid myths placed on the free choice to accept or reject God: EVERYTHING in this abortive theodicy revolves around it. No one can honestly mistake that point, not even a Calvinist.

The central conceit of Mr. Chaing's HELL is the idea of a man accepting God and being rejected by Him. A man is baptized, and he is the only one out of all humankind who is punished with eternal torment -- it is just contemptible.

It would be like reading Ayn Rand, who, in a fit of anger, criticize the Soviet government for being too individualistic, and practicing ruthless cut-throat capitalist competition. Ayn Rand can criticize the Soviets for a wide number of sins, but if she condemned them for that, all and sundry would know she was just uttering a falsehood meant for the ignorant.

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Re: I am not convinced.
[info]rotty_0079
2009-11-20 04:29 am UTC (link)
If the Catholic Church in a parallel universe where the Holy Grail was the womb of Mary Magdalene, who was the mother of the Merovingian kings, what is that to us, who live in a universe where the Holy Grail was the sacred cup Joseph of Aramethea brought to England, which Galahad the Pure, son of Lancelot, now guards in the otherworldly chapel of Sarras in Wales?

For shame, Mr. Wright. The Holy Grail is a gem and its keeper is Parzival, who became the Grail King by asking his predecessor Anfortas "What ails you?" while visiting the Templars in the Grail Castle with his half-brother the African paynim king Feirefiz, who accepted baptism to marry the Grail Maiden Repanse de Schoye. How dare you besmirch the good name of the Grail King, who is no less than Prester John's uncle!

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